Author’s note: Another “opening line as prompt” story, using the prompt I received yesterday. I have played catch-up with the writing of these little pieces, but I will catch up on posting a bit more slowly, so that your feeds aren’t full of A keyboard and an Open Mind. 🙂
She knelt on the carpet of her new house, carefully unwrapping ornaments. There had never been so much as a Christmas tree in the orphanage at this time of year, but Katie had always watched with fascination as decorations had appeared all over the city. Snow would catch on the tree in the middle of the main square and the baubles would frost over, making it seem like something out of one of the fairy stories the older kids would tell after lights out.
Now Katie had received a Christmas present far greater than anything she could have come up with if she had been given the chance to sit on Father Christmas’ knee. A lovely couple named William and Barbara had decided to adopt her. She had packed up her things, such as they were, put on her coat, and then rode in William’s car back to their house. Her house, now.
It was only a week until Christmas, but knowing they would have a little girl living with them soon, Barbara had refrained from putting up the tree until they could do it together. Finally the last of the baubles were hung and there was only one thing left.
Barbara put her arms around Katie’s middle and hoisted her up so she could reach the top of the tree.
Katie placed the angel on the top branch, and then Barbara set her down again and they surveyed their work.
“Very well done, Katie,” Barbara said. “It looks as though you’ve been doing this for years.” She smiled and took Katie’s hand, giving it a squeeze.
“I’ve always wanted to,” said Katie, beaming.
“And so you shall,” Barbara replied, “every year from now on.”
6 thoughts on “December 6 (sort of) – A First Christmas”
That is a perfect short-short! I’ve never been able to do that, but you’ve captured the perfect snapshot in time. Outstanding!
Thanks, Lara! I’m really pleased you’re enjoying these. I’ve had a lot of practice writing “Missing scene” style shorts like this is fan fiction, so I think that’s where I’ve developed the knack. Having said that, this is one I’m certainly thinking of picking up again after December. I’ve been wanting to write usomething Christmas-y for a good couple of years and now I’ve finally got some ground work.
If you don’t mind, I’m going to copy this to my computer and use it as an example of something I aspire to. Is that okay?
Certainly! Go for it 🙂